Tuesday, August 14, 2018

Rileys blog post week 4 term 3

my sport is hockey Riley term 3 




The sport that i play is hockey. I have played hockey for there years it has been my favourite sport ever. I have learned the most is putting my stick down. I think that i am really good at hockey
My best game was wen my team won the score was 2.3 I will work on next hockey on focusing when the ball comes to me.

the end by Riley   

2 comments:

  1. I'm glad you enjoy playing your winter sport, Riley. Remember you need to read your writing back to yourself and also to a buddy to check your writing makes sense. There are a couple sentences that don't sound quite right and you are also missing some full stops.

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  2. Good job with your blog Riley.

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